I... I love your characterization. I love how this fic is made up of Ranka's snapshots, little bits of introspection, little bits of dialogue. There's a lot of wonderful detail here in their relationship, and I think you really caught it all very well. I could imagine it perfectly, in their voices, which is what is important. Sheryl's teasing and diva-ish tendencies, Ranka's wide-eyed way of taking everything in, coming to realizations... it's all here.
Oh god, I'd love to see their house together. xD Alto's way too lucky.
and ksldfja; oh god, this reminds me. I don't know if I can finish my thingy in time for the exchange, though the sketch is definitely done... ;; got exams til the 15th that I need to study for...
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Date: 2008-12-30 12:08 pm (UTC)Oh god, I'd love to see their house together. xD
Alto's way too lucky.and ksldfja; oh god, this reminds me. I don't know if I can finish my thingy in time for the exchange, though the sketch is definitely done... ;; got exams til the 15th that I need to study for...