ext_20066 ([identity profile] calophi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] heroescuties 2008-12-30 04:10 pm (UTC)

I think maybe you got that quick feeling from it because the writing skips past all those months of touring to when Ranka realizes why she is feeling the way she does. There would have been a lot of time for the two to grow closer. Keeping that in mind, I found it was very nicely paced. =D

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