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abarero ([personal profile] abarero) wrote in [community profile] heroescuties 2008-12-31 03:56 am (UTC)

Yeah, like [livejournal.com profile] calophi said, the fic pretty much starts at the realization. The build up is something I would have definitely explored more had this been a chaptered fic, but since it was a oneshot I had to use solely the narrative to try and get it to this point without just ignoring the build-up completely.

I am very glad you liked it otherwise though! Perhaps I'll look into doing another oneshot focusing more on a the first inklings of a relationship, since that definitely has potential as well. :)

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