Yay! I really enjoyed that. You captured Ron nicely, and I liked the part about George. Just one little typo that I spotted.
"I leaned last year it's no use arguing with you about helping out Harry. And as much as I'll worry and spend every hour you're out there staring at the clock and hoping you make it home safe…"
I'm guessing that it should be "learned". That aside, great job!
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Date: 2009-01-12 05:26 am (UTC)"I leaned last year it's no use arguing with you about helping out Harry. And as much as I'll worry and spend every hour you're out there staring at the clock and hoping you make it home safe…"
I'm guessing that it should be "learned". That aside, great job!