First off, you are amazing. Seriously, this is so awesome. What a great idea to have them go on this sort of an adventure. I love that they do it as a side thing, and wow. You started it off with a bang and it so action packed. You do the action scenes so well, and of course all the cute moments between the two. Such a good balance in the romance and action. And of course the scene with Australia (Which I need to random say I love you using him btw ♥ ) With lines like: “Oh yeah. You are looking at the proud owners of Osiris’s golden cock!” And “No way, mate. I’m not being the third wheel. This has ‘Couple’s Weekend’ written all over it.” And of course all the references are great.
This is so so good. And GAH cliffhanger of doom! I know you like those...and you probably will do it a lot too...XD dang it! I can't wait for more! ♥
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:26 am (UTC)This is so so good. And GAH cliffhanger of doom!
I know you like those...and you probably will do it a lot too...XD dang it!I can't wait for more! ♥