First I got to apologize for commenting this so late because these're just AWESOME and ohmygod Ancient Egypyptian mythology @o@ that's fjdals GREAT I love the mythology so much and I was SO EXCITED when I saw the first chapter (and you can't even imagine how excited after reading it, and the chapters after it)! Action + adventure + romance + America and England + Egyptian mythology = TOO AWESOME TO DESCRIBE.
The beginning of this chapter is also almost too awesome to describe :'DD. That's so America to record some HERO-material while escaping some tribesmen and England not approving it at all. And the whole first scene is SO EXCITING and exactly the reason why I love action/adventure fics! It's great, and America calling England a hero is so sweet <3.
America and Australia's talk about Osiris' 'donger' made me snort aloud (and England's reactions are always so priceless <3) and I love the Indiana Jones allusions so much xD!
"America grinned. “Come on England. You’re not a kid, a ditzy singer, or my son.” With a grimace he added, “And you are definitely not my father.”"
Pffft exactly what I mean!
All the historical details and such are making me squirm in my chair - I just love them so much, and I love when I recognise a name or a place or something and it's just so fun to read this! And it's all just more fun to read as your writing style is so lovely *u* I love it how you describe the environment and everything so detailedly!
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Late comment is late D:
Date: 2010-04-13 03:59 pm (UTC)The beginning of this chapter is also almost too awesome to describe :'DD. That's so America to record some HERO-material while escaping some tribesmen and England not approving it at all. And the whole first scene is SO EXCITING and exactly the reason why I love action/adventure fics! It's great, and America calling England a hero is so sweet <3.
America and Australia's talk about Osiris' 'donger' made me snort aloud (and England's reactions are always so priceless <3) and I love the Indiana Jones allusions so much xD!
"America grinned. “Come on England. You’re not a kid, a ditzy singer, or my son.” With a grimace he added, “And you are definitely not my father.”"
Pffft exactly what I mean!
All the historical details and such are making me squirm in my chair - I just love them so much, and I love when I recognise a name or a place or something and it's just so fun to read this! And it's all just more fun to read as your writing style is so lovely *u* I love it how you describe the environment and everything so detailedly!
And America catching England -- awwww ♥ !!