Abarero's Creative Journal

Gah so amazing! You really kept the same great pace going through this chapter as you did the first and the scene with the flood was so epic. And I loved how they kept being heroic. America being caught in the rope and the way you described every second of him being caught and England helping. I really liked how well they work as a team in these sort of situations. They know each other so well and you showed it off very well. You did such wonderful detail on the scene over all, very vivid and action packed. And of course the next scene was perfect. Wow...the sex was perfect andhot and cute and so very them. I laughed so much at Hathor watching them and the hat. I loved the mention of the hat at the end of it. And you again, have them being so so much in love and I just love how you show it. Like when America was tracing the hieroglyphics on England (LOL there should be a word in middle Egyptian for stodgy ). I really liked the convo afterwords when they discussed what had been going on...and the McDonalds line from England was so cute as well. The stuff with the curse is ominous though. I really want to know how it pans out in the end. And of course the cliff hanger. YOU AND YOUR CLIFF HANGERS!

This was an absolutely epic. I can't wait to see what happens next! ♥