This was absolutely and completely epic. I cannot tell you how amazing this chapter was. The stuff with the jinn had me completely on edge and it was so suspenseful. Plus the jinn it's self was super creepy and America and England were so great in their reactions to it. Just wow. It was so sweet when they finally got through it and I loved how it felt like it made them closer and how deep and meaningful each and every kiss was. And when they finally got the heart and how happy they were. You could just feel it.
This chapter again, was so IC, well written, and you did such a great job with the research and everything that went into it. It was so awesome. GAH And another cliffhanger! I can't wait to see the rest of this fic! Amazing job! ♥
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Date: 2009-12-28 11:09 am (UTC)This chapter again, was so IC, well written, and you did such a great job with the research and everything that went into it. It was so awesome. GAH And another cliffhanger! I can't wait to see the rest of this fic! Amazing job! ♥