http://pantstacular.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] pantstacular.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] heroescuties 2010-06-09 06:36 am (UTC)

*Finally gets around to reviewing this*

I just love this fic so much. I love how you write both of these characters so much. Seychelles was so adorable, and France was oddly lovable. I like the idea of France stealing her uniform so he could see her. I can easily see him coming up with this idea as he would see no issue in wearing her outfit. (I loved the comment about his thighs btw. OH FRANCE.)

But most importantly you did a wonderful job at portraying their relationship. France does legitimately care about her, but in his own way. You showed that by his concern and loving words...but still willing to try to coupe a feel. And Seychelles in return, caring and loving but willing to stand up for herself and put France in his place. I really liked how you showed her insecurities about herself, but that hope and brightness she has. You followed it up with the awesome scene when they are deciding where he should sleep. I do like that he offered to sleep on the floor, and her answer to him. I totally approved of the kisses. GO SEYCHELLES BTW XD. I just loved their awkward fluff so much.

And ha! Figures it was Hungary that did it. XD I was kind of wondering, for a second but yeah obvious. I just approved of this so so much. It was IC, in the Gauken-verse... It had fluff, humor, guys in drag, I really couldn't ask for much more. Thank you so so much for this. ♥

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