I'm really glad to hear how much that sequence worked for you! I enjoy that sort of thing as well- in which two characters just have to keep supporting each other. It's always such a great dynamic. I'm also pleased to hear that you're enjoying Tony! He's going to play an important role in this story, so I always get excited when people are enjoying his role so far. XD

And I'm super glad the action reads all right. It's always so tricky to get the images of the scene in my head into words that I feel convey everything I envision. So to hear that a it works for you is wonderful for me.

Oh yes, England is definitely sensing a hint of the danger to come. And as you noted, it's something America can't sense, which adds a whole other level of problems to their situation.

As always, thank you for commenting and supporting me on this story! :)