I just re-read the previous chapters and this one. I feel like I'm watching an adventure movie; I can visualise it so well with your smooth writing, and the transitions between scenes are just right. America is very adorable, still using pick-up lines for England when they've reached the room X3 you write them so well!
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Date: 2012-06-16 08:09 am (UTC)OH GOD THE CLIFFHANGER.